Sunday, March 30, 2008
Journal 9: Time let my son change!
I didn't recognize as a my son at first. David! I called with him quite low tone. He also noded his head doubtfully. Soon, we hugged each other strongly and we were for a while with being hugged. After a while, I realized that I was hugged in his bosom. He was obviously little bit fat and he was just 6 feet. For two years, he was totally changed. He has gotten absolutely slenderer and he has gotten 1 and half inches taller than before two years. He has changed not only his aspect but also his thinking. In stead of me, he led my two daughters and he taught them. Moreover, he understood the reason that I left from my family. However, he passed so hard time without me; his father. Even though he was teenager, he seemed like an adult. Before I explained my circumstances concerning his mother, he already knew about that reasons almost. In fact, I hesitated how I say him and what I say him. He is still passing hard time because he lives in Seoul by himself. He cooks every meal, wash dishes, and wash clothes like me. However, he didn't have that kind of experiences than ever. Although he has rough situation, he will accomplish his problem because he can do to get things done. I believe that he will can do that.
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Dear, Elaine,
Please correct only one my next sentence! I am always confusing that kind of expression. I really appreciate for your comments. Thank you! See you tomorrow!
wow! You are great!!!
Father which is great to great son.
Oliver, I'm not sure which sentence you're asking me to correct. I'll be happy to do so if you tell me which one.
You sound like you have a lot to be proud of about your son. He is obviously growing up to be a remarkable man. I am not surprised! I'm glad the reunion was so warm and wonderful.
Oliver, I don't know exactly who Jane is, but she's obviously a friend of yours. I'd appreciate it if she wouldn't leave comments on your blog. It's really just for our class. Thanks a lot.
I mean the last sentence; "he will accomplish his problem because he can do to get things done". Jane is my wife and I said her "don't write any comment for our blog"
Sorry about that!
I hope your wife wasn't upset that we asked her not to comment on the blog. I had no idea it was your wife.
I'll try to help you with the sentence. I think what you mean is "He can accomplish his goals because he knows how to get things done." The main problem with what you wrote is that you said "accomplish his problem." Accomplish has a positive meaning, and problem has a negative meaning, so you can't accomplish a problem. You accomplish a goal, an assignment, etc. I hope that helps.
Dear Elaine, Thank you very much! Nowadays, I am learning so many grammar and simple expression from you. I know my English is so awkward than other students. However, I am doing my best. Although I am busy and slow, I will do all constantly. Please, watch me carefully!
Thank you for your comments!
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